Over those years since I've written the book there are several things I noticed that could have been made a lot better. That's why I'm making this post.
I am currently revising Gears: The Legend of Toontown to the 2nd edition. This will be first released chapter by chapter as an audiobook slideshow on my YouTube channel (which will be unveiled soon).
Afterwards I might work on the sequel. (Might, ok? I have like a dozen other projects I'm still working on.)
- Better grammar will be used, especially regarding character thoughts. It will probably become purely third person.
- Important characters will have more information added about them while some others may be removed.
- Locations and scenes will be described in more detail.